Wednesday, July 7, 2010

Hope

Hope floats above the shade of the old evergreen tree
fueling the wish, the dream inside of me

A risk, caution - part of the warm spring wind
my word, my trust, I won't dare rescind

You gentle soul, you've been through much
now you're my supporting beam, my leaning crutch

lavishing love upon a spirit raining drops of tears
your calmness, stillness easing those chilling fears

as your music blooms in my auspicious heart
may the lyrics read....may we never part

14 comments:

tattytiara said...

You paint a beautiful picture of a beautiful relationship.

Finding Pam said...

A love like this is incredible. Beautiful poetry.

Kay said...

what a place to be...

Opaque said...

This is how a good relationship feels like.

Noelle Dunn.... A Poet in Progress said...

I thought so too :)

LarryG said...

you are a soul toucher Noelle,
you got hope exponential...

Felicitas said...

This is soooo beautiful, Noelle! This is certainly the loveliest of friendships!

Cynthia said...

Truly sweet and romantic.

Calli said...

This IS lovely.

Hope your summer is equally lovely!

and go girl with your new book! Awesome!

~Calli

heavealie said...

very well written poem full of love and hope.beautiful and sweet.keep writing.

Poets United said...

"You gentle soul, you've been through much
now you're my supporting beam, my leaning crutch"

I enjoyed the poem and was really drawn to the verse above. It resembles so much of my relationship. Your words are wonderful thank you for sahring.

Wild Rose said...

Nice poem and your blog is really cute :)

Noelle Dunn.... A Poet in Progress said...

@ Larry G - thank you so much... I need hope exponential right now!!

@ Felicitas, Calli, and Cynthia...thanks darlings!

Noelle Dunn.... A Poet in Progress said...

@ healealie, poets united and wild rose.....your feedback is PRICELESS!

thanks to you all!