his words drip with disinterest
and the truth is revealed
as he fails to look her in the eyes
no questions left to ponder
as all uncertainty is gone
he wants to have it all his way...
the poison of his self-centeredness
has chipped away her desire
to follow through with acquiescence
in hopes of something more
the apparation reveals the truth
in the day light of her mind
'twas just a dream of a lonesome heart
and now it's time to say good bye
17 comments:
Wow! I've so been there. Very powerful poem!
Hello, Noelle. Thankfully, I have never been there but your poem was moving.
Hope you are well. Been missing you.
but every now and then the universe in totality cooperates and a dream comes true and then, nothing else matters -!
hugs and sweet love to you Noelle!
You are very amazing here :)
So brave and willing to take a stand.
I do like the way you do it.
Strong words from some a gentle place..Lovely.
Thanks everyone - you're wonderful! (fyi - not about me:))
Yes, we have all been there, but you state it so wonderfully, Noelle!
ps~ isn't it strange when we feel the need to tell our readers it is not about us, otherwise, they think we've gone off the deep end and are in a bad place. Sometimes, writing is just, writing...I know you know that ;)
~Calli
in that case - i love the way you see it and describe it! :)
Calli, your hair is darker now - looks pretty!!
touching poem... sad and yet lovely... thanks for sharing
great prose without rhyme.
I struggle with that. thank you for your writing where we can share.
read my blog, just started.
give feedback
I want to write poetry
LITSNT (life is too short not to)
Hi Noelle, this is DreamDancer, aka Roxy. I had to move my blog, please come join me on my new blog at http://virtualwomanofessence.blogspot.com/
Thank you and I look forward to seeing you there :)
I write feelings that don't apply to me a lot of the times. I do find it, my kind of way to express what I feel when I see the images of our world and sense the immense pain from others I don't even know.
I love your writing my friend…
Thanks George!! I'm glad to see that we get our inspiration from the same places!!
Noelle
Your writing is powerful and I believe universal for women at some point in their lives. Well done post
Linda
I just had to come back and read this again... beautifully sad yet powerful!
beautiful words & feel
Mr.good & Mr.bad
Wonderfully expressed. It's no small thing to feel and know when it's time to say goodbye.
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