Thursday, January 21, 2010

The Design of Us

Memories
swim
through my
faded existence
memories of you
I channel my force
towards positive
today it's not hard
like yesterday
and probably tomorrow
I remember the gentleness
you showered over
a broken body
devoid of all things good
you made me believe
and so I was salvagable
though, that was a fleeting
dream lived out by a fairy
just as was the design of us
it was fun to pretend
for awhile

6 comments:

Poetic Artist said...

Beautiful words as always.
Take care my friend.
Katelen

Opaque said...

I love many lines here. Well done!!!

Shadow said...

a new style. it suits you...

Calli said...

I like it, Noelle and you have been sooo busy, it seems. Good for you!

keep writing, we enjoy!

Noelle Dunn.... A Poet in Progress said...

Thanks so very much!!! I think I might be wordless without you guys...and well good ole heartbreat keeps the pen to paper too!!! ugh.

Felicitas said...

Break-ups are always tough - but they provide great material for the poet! This one was wonderful!