Wednesday, October 20, 2010

Dream

I have tucked your words

beneath my pillow

in hopes that my dreams

shall capture them and

bring peace to my

restless slumber

and maybe, just maybe

for some fleeting moments

before I wake, I shall truly

exist as you have written

me out to be and I may wake

with the proud memory of

my grand performance in the

starring role upon which you

have cast me

10 comments:

Isha Ethera said...

I love that! creating a memory of some illusion it seems. I like the words a lot. . and I love the first two lines they are nice :)

Shadow said...

to see ourselves as others see us, now that's a beautiful wish...

Opaque said...

Really a dream... a dream that can come true...

Rick said...

N-
To have someone see us greater than we believe ourselves to be is a heart worth tending. Lovely
~rick

Noelle Dunn.... A Poet in Progress said...

Rick! Glad to see you stopped by. and Thank you!

Triana said...

"my grand performance in the starring role upon which you have cast me" - I absolutely love that line!

Craftsman of light said...

Noelle,
i love the way you begining, i love the way you follow up.
.......very romantic!
And thats what touches me!

Noelle Dunn.... A Poet in Progress said...

@ Triana..that is my favorite line too!! xo

@ Craftsman...Thank you, for sending your light my way!

Patty said...

Precious! Girl, you are so talented with words!

Noelle Dunn.... A Poet in Progress said...

Thanks so much!!!