Monday, August 10, 2009

The Walk


I'm on this walk

this journey through time

where I exist only in the eyes

of the sincere observer

but there are so few,

so few who choose to see

and look for my truth

it is there for the knowing

but is that only knower me

I walk through days stormy

and welcome days serene

I make it one step at a time

as I free myself of judgment

and the sudden misfortune

of black coal actions and choices

that cast fire upon my

thoughts and perceptions

leaving me solo to clear the ashes

and nurse wild burns

of ego controlled actions

I concentrate - fully aware

of each step, each breath

as I walk, though

there are those times

when I must walk - alone

11 comments:

Shadow said...

some things, one has to do alone... you make it sound not half bad...

Kay said...

I absolutly adore this piece, just wonderful, so full of truths and faith and hope and dispair. Encouraging...just wonderful

Tabitha.Montgomery said...

Wow.That is fantastic.
I can feel your presence.
And your spirit,Noelle.
Thanks for sharing this!!

Anonymous said...

Noelle-I recognize these emotions, this journey. even in a crowd of friends and loved ones, I feel isolated in my journey. I think I even shield myself by blueprint. crazy. Lovely writing. ~rick

Calli said...

Yes, this is beautiful, Noelle.

Sometimes, our most 'powerful' walk is done solo.

Hope you are enjoying your summer!
~Calli

Cynthia said...

hi Noelle, a beautifully written
profound poem - especially
poignant: " leaving me solo to
clear the ashes and nurse wild
burns of ego controlled actions".

Jos said...

Some things you can read time and again ... each time gaining something new. This is like that, I have visited to re-read many times now which is something I rarely do. The only true and complete knower can only ever be you, but writing like this gives us precious glimpses all the same. xx Jos

Noelle Dunn.... A Poet in Progress said...

Thank you!

Jon said...

lovely poem... thanks for sharing your work with us...

Anonymous said...

I love this one Noelle.

Just Be Real said...

Noelle, this is great. Thank you for your words....