I'm on this walk
this journey through time
where I exist only in the eyes
of the sincere observer
but there are so few,
so few who choose to see
and look for my truth
it is there for the knowing
but is that only knower me
I walk through days stormy
and welcome days serene
I make it one step at a time
as I free myself of judgment
and the sudden misfortune
of black coal actions and choices
that cast fire upon my
thoughts and perceptions
leaving me solo to clear the ashes
and nurse wild burns
of ego controlled actions
I concentrate - fully aware
of each step, each breath
as I walk, though
there are those times
when I must walk - alone
11 comments:
some things, one has to do alone... you make it sound not half bad...
I absolutly adore this piece, just wonderful, so full of truths and faith and hope and dispair. Encouraging...just wonderful
Wow.That is fantastic.
I can feel your presence.
And your spirit,Noelle.
Thanks for sharing this!!
Noelle-I recognize these emotions, this journey. even in a crowd of friends and loved ones, I feel isolated in my journey. I think I even shield myself by blueprint. crazy. Lovely writing. ~rick
Yes, this is beautiful, Noelle.
Sometimes, our most 'powerful' walk is done solo.
Hope you are enjoying your summer!
~Calli
hi Noelle, a beautifully written
profound poem - especially
poignant: " leaving me solo to
clear the ashes and nurse wild
burns of ego controlled actions".
Some things you can read time and again ... each time gaining something new. This is like that, I have visited to re-read many times now which is something I rarely do. The only true and complete knower can only ever be you, but writing like this gives us precious glimpses all the same. xx Jos
Thank you!
lovely poem... thanks for sharing your work with us...
I love this one Noelle.
Noelle, this is great. Thank you for your words....
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